*edit* updated the audio with new vocals… my voice is getting back to normal. still not at its best but better than the first try! and some parts of the melody are different now ^__^
here’s the piano and melody of the song. the lyrics are a little different than the last time so i’ll post them again. also since it’s 4:30 in the morning i couldn’t really sing my heart out without waking people and you can hear me typing and clicking before the song stars. end result? i sound like a little kid talking about very serious subject matter with slurred words… oh well, it’s only a draft! just wanted to see what you guys thought of it so far! don’t be too harsh until the final result please! anyways the lyrics and music is a little bit less than halfway done! SO excited ^__^
verse 1 pt.1
you and i we weren’t always perfect
but you and i were here
now the nights stretch on forever
and my days become unclear
cuz you aren’t here, cuz you aren’t here
verse 1 pt.2
so i built up this circle around me
and i won’t let just anyone in
when i think “maybe i could be ready”
i don’t seem to fit right in
there will be a b-section here
chorus 1
now i’m too shy to open up myself because of you
it makes me cry to know someone i trusted can hurt me like you do
and i wanna try but i’m too petrified
to move, cuz you moved away
Nice lyrics. How long have you been writting music> /
